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"~Words to break a Soul~"
  by Saunsia


Though i kneel on bended knees,
drowning in my tears,
heartbroken
eyes swollen
head hurtin,
soul burnin, i kno
my life is far from perfect...
thoughts jumbled
my mind just continues to puzzle
as i listen fa a mendn word,
to soothe a soul broken...
i trusted you
w/ all i am
i cried
i begged
you told me you'd forgive
you'd still love me til the end
never thought you' do,
the things you said you did
how do i forgive,
the words that broke my soul...
they critized and judged
they teased and scorned
but still,
i defended cause i cared
they could never kno the love we shared
betrayed,
never thought i'd see the day
I THOUGHT WE WERE PAST OUR MISTAKE!!!!
my heartr yearned,
my soul ached,
i begged and pleaded fa you to stay,
ignorant to the wrongs u made
now hurt and in pain my poor heart lay...
the day,
you broke my soul...
my mind wanders
my thoughts jumbled
my mind countines to puzzle,
why would he hurt me,
i continue to mumble...
as time flies by,
and tears do fade,
i realize the problem
and with a brand new take
i stand to my feet
and dry my eyes cause i kno
no matter how small an infidelity i commited
i still broke his soul....
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Date Submitted: Jul 19, 2008 (02:38 PM)
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  H.H. Holloway
07/20/08 (12:39 PM) 
I felt dual heartbreak on this one--he breaking your heart and then you breaking his--a classic puppy love scenario--your words flowed like rippling water and you kept the pace until the end--I find that you are more effective when you lay your heart out in an outline and then execute--Exquisite young poetess--10!!!

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