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"WILL I DIE"
  by TurtleSoul


will i die
if i give you my all

if i put my heart in your hands
wrap my soul around you

give you a piece of my life
and all of my love

will i die if i
leave it all on the field

if i take every step like it is my last
hold the ball wit a life changing grasp

let my hearts cry 4 rest
go unherd

all for the good of the team
and that championship dream

will i die if
i never learn how 2 stop

and how 2 not give my all
to put it all on the line
when im holding that ball

will i die if
i give you my life in these words

a script of my past present and future

with every line i
lay my life down

more to you
so you can know me

but will i die
what makes no sence to you

makes that perfact to me
leaves you bewildered

will i die if i
leave you with my soul

a soul traped in the ink of this
this scripted life on

the page of time
leading you knower fast

but somewere important
i cant help but feel helpless

when i dont read my self
Turtle Soul is my name

this is my game
a life of this all

football till i fall
poetry till my lifes end '

love till times end
damn what am i to do

full of words yet toung time
so tell me can you help me

for all i am is on this page
what will my next line be

what will you quote from me
if i die from the next stroke of this pen

yet on this page my life has no end
so quote my

dead lifeless heatbeat '
that jumps on this page

but my question to you is

will all this kill me

.... lol damn this is proof that i just write what i feel shit cuz it makes no sence unless your me lol well u tell me if it makes sence please rate and comment
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Date Submitted: Aug 07, 2008 (12:30 PM)
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