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"~WIFEY~"
  by Saunsia


OK YALL!!! I CHALLENGED MY HUBBY TO WRITE A POEM ABOUT HOW I FEEL ABOUT HIM AND I WOULD DO THE SAME... YALL PROBALLY KNOW HIM AS THE GS WRITER JAYMOORE... BUT YEA, I WON THE CHALLENGE LOL BUT IF YOU WANNA JUDGE FA YO SELF READ MINE THEN READ HIS CALLED HUBBY AND LET US KNOW WAT YOU THINK...ENJOY

NO HOMO =}

elegant...
the way her body curves
materiallized
to shapes and forms fantasized
in my imagination
i'd like to call superb
more then just a dime
her thickness
it simply blows my mind
w/ every strut, switch and kiss
i sense
chills up my spine...
from the arch of her feet
to her eyes,
my eyes drift up...
then linger to her thighs
DAMN! a nigga be prayin to get inside,
or at least in between
where so much heavenly grace lies
to feel her internal heat...
rubbin gently on her sides
her skin so kissbly smooth,
seductively tight
her body elite
no one else alive can compete...
her thoughts unique
w/ every poetic lyric
she spits
i find myself drowning so deep
in love
hoping to bring strength
to her heart so weak
as i regurgitate
the verse my own mendin heart speaks...
never though this
curvacious beauty
could emite so much intellect
and bare realness
so much emotion
in this one person
so much in common
i can see me
on bended knee b4 GOD
taking the hand of an angel
in happily wedded bliss
and w/ one kiss
sending her right back to heaven
the place from which
she fell...
im under her spell,
captured,
captivated,
in a love so real
never will there be a better love
a more perfect one
with lips so smooth
and dreams so big,
addicted to the way u make me feel
want u to birth my kids
spend the rest or you r days
wit the only one who,
will truely and unconditionally love you,
for the rest of your existence adore you,
bestfriend, future mother, and soon to be wifey,
baby....
you r my life
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Date Submitted: Jul 19, 2008 (03:14 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/19/08 (05:04 PM)
Author: Tearz
Poem Title: ~Hubby~

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comment icon  COMMENTS (12)
  daughter of zi...
11/15/08 (06:49 PM) 
this is very well writen.

  DeepThinker7
11/14/08 (03:08 PM) 
Nice flow and different thought exchange. Nice use of showing what a man feels for a woman that he loves!!! 10 stars

  MzFyne_N_Bless...
11/14/08 (02:18 PM) 
l0l...Okay, both of yall did a good job. I really love both writes...can tell who did better, but it wooulda been a REAL nice collabo between the two of you..I love them both! *thumbs up*

  MzFyne_N_Bless...
11/14/08 (02:13 PM) 
Okay..this MOST DEFINITELY NICE!! Now I gotta go read your man's write to see how yall did as far as this challenge. But this was nice..alotta nice rhymes, beautiful imagery..you did yo thang, girl. ten starz and a fave.

  ash_g
09/23/08 (02:55 PM) 
awwwwww...this is cute

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