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"why ya leavin...?"
A suuwuu and 2DAMNREAL..A.K.A Whyte Lion..Soul Of Zion Collaboration


  N/A:

I'm honored to write with you this last time
cause I know you plan on leaving after this poem
so I appreciate you taking the time to hear me out..

we had good times, somethings we can look back and laugh at
and I remember you once said "you showed me I wasn't half bad"
well, that's kind of like sayin' ..you bring the best out of me,
so what I'm tryin' to say is you must trust what I see...
I see a poet, a master of himself and broader realities
a personal vision of movin' foward is no fallacy
so relax in happy self-acceptance
I know exactly what'll help the tension
make ya mood somethin' festive
the spiritually sensitive and divinely joyous
we want to know who you are, kindly show us
your inner identity's work is well under way
there's still ink in your pen to bleed,
deep down I can tell you wanna stay...
maybe petty details bore you
but I heard many females adore you
there's plenty of time don't misgauge the speed
consider what to put in not which way to leave
poetry's not a chore but more a daily practice
it's also a hobby but it's mainly your passion
consuming all human sorrows and delusions
I came to your page knowin' I could borrow your "two cents"
your advice either for the heart or between the eyebrows
I think we relate cause we both have a desire to lead a cleaner lifestyle
whether it be what we use to talk about or choose to write down
I respect your mind bruh....I just want to show my gratitude
I don't really want you to leave but I ain't mad at you
I just want you to see your more than just an average dude
who writes average poetry,
we both have an understandin' of livin' hopelessly
but stop and listen cause I'm optomistic
bein' understood isn't what your desperate to accomplish is it
cause I don't understand why you have to leave...
leave the lyrical loft,
that's like a throne to a king or a genius of thoughts

  2DAMNREAL..A.K.A Whyte Lion..Soul Of Zion:

Truly...I will be a Honor 2 let my mind Drip In this Current Thought Process..with You..Very Few ever challenged me as you did...only RTJ and couple of other's...but more so everything that you just said...humble's me...2 my very core...and nothing i could compose shall ever touch the level of depth and respect that i have 4 you 4 all u just spoke...but i will try...here we go my nigg.....


Don't Really know the words I should Say...Life's a Relay..I Replay...and Slay..but I'm...mearly a Slave...2 My Lust..like My Love...Like My TRUST....Just a slave 2 what....I've Been Taught...what I've Bought..and the Cost?....Counteract that of the Thought's I've Tossed...

People's Word's Misplaced...Action's Tip'd with a Poison In which My Blood's Laced...the Taste..of the Disdain..leave's a pain...untamed...but My Name..remain's..Like My Happiness...Unclaimed....Ordained a Rain that Brang...Flame's....Liquid Cries of my Inner's Demise..and Still they Say I ARISE...But Sigh's...Shake's My Intermost Chamber's...I feel the danger of the Stranger's Seeking My Internal's Etching's...the Keying..of My Being...So It's Seeming... What I Hope 2 Acomplish goes beyond Being Understood...or Being the Image Posted Up In Every Hood...that the Gangsta Gurl's Wish they Could...and Know they Would!....It's beyond Man's Scope's..I'm the Spritual Hope 4 the Rope a dope's....But I've Lost the Note's...In which My Heart Play's that Melody...It's Tellin' me...Time 2 Just Let it B.
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Date Submitted: Aug 08, 2008 (05:04 PM)
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  illest_PERSONA
09/03/08 (02:50 AM) 
*rereading my comment*.... [Ps] I can't type for shit late at night. Sorry! lol

  illest_PERSONA
09/03/08 (02:50 AM) 
*gasp* I think I just heard that "Big Brother" Song by Kanye West lol This is the most AWW'est poem I've ever read! SuuWuu shows love without seem like he's huggin on anyone nuts.. and that's hard to do if you can't keep it real.. and SuuWuu kept is 100% and I DUG that soooo much! "I don't really want you to leave but I aint mad at you" <------AAAAWWWWWWWWWWW! Wtf! Group Hug! And 2DAMN u ain't goin NODAMN wear.. stop it! You belong here. :) Dope write, guys!

  Miss LadyBug
08/20/08 (06:20 AM) 
I cant believe that you are going, you are such an increidible poet. I admire and look up to you having only been writing for such a short space of time. 2damnreal, dont do it!! Suuwuu , I have not read any of your work, love the way you flow and this was jus exceptional your words were emotional deep and strong at the same time. Im going to have to look in and read more of your writes. This was a beautiful yet sat write. well done to both poets.

  2DAMNREAL..A.K...
08/11/08 (04:11 PM) 
lol...well actually i was gonna take my time on this write and hear all Suuwuu had 2 say...but i see i left 4 a min. 2 long. none the less it's always respect when working with you my dude....right about now...my minds jumpin' through hoop's...but all you said 2 me hit hard truly it did....you gave me far 2 much blessing's and respect...but u kno u always get it back...i wanna do 1 mo' labo tho...i got a fire idea and i wantr you 2 b down

  DaRk KnIgHt
08/09/08 (05:32 AM) 
BRA NO WAY, AND MEAN NO WAY SHOULD YOU LEAVE!! LETS TALK, TOLD YO BEFORE...IM HERE..HIT ME UP ON YAHOO!!! NOW DATS OUT DA WAY.. DIS IS TIGHT.. LOVING THE SMOOOTH FLOW FROM ONE TO THE OTHER VERBAGE IS OF DA CHAIN.. THE OPENING THE CLOSURE CLEAR AND CUT.. DANG IM FEELING DIS DROP.. DEFO A FAV...YEP FOR SURE THIS IS HOW ITS DONE... TWO OF MY FAVOURITE POETS. DOIING DARE DARN THANG.. SUUWUU BRA, YOU KNOW HOW ITS GOING DOWN YOU KNOW EXACTLY WAT I TINK OF YOUR FLOW TIGHT AS HELL DIS IS NO DIFFERENT...
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