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"Watched You Suffer"
  by Lil Lexis


Barely remember
Your smile.. just your suffering
Hospital Visits

Then I attended
Your funeral.. Basically
all i remember

If I remember
anything at all.. Its that
I watched you suffer


[R.I.P. My Momz Joann Denise Williams 10.08.98]
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Date Submitted: Jul 19, 2008 (04:06 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/19/08 (05:18 PM)
Author: Leg_Movin_Mountains
Poem Title: SUFFER

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comment icon  COMMENTS (9)
  Dawn
07/20/08 (10:28 PM) 
This was hott...I'm feeling ya flow and emotion...Eventhough you feel she suffered, at that very moment you wrote this poem..she became a live and it now living through the grace of ya lyrics..keep blessing the pen ma..One love

  cocoadiva
07/19/08 (07:12 PM) 
she is no longer suffering now.. she is in a better place... 10

  Starstruck
07/19/08 (06:12 PM) 
WOW IS ALL I CAN SAY.......

  Leg_Movin_Moun...
07/19/08 (04:53 PM) 
AYE STANDING OVATION IS IN PLACE YOU GOT IT GURL YOU GOT IT ON THIS ONE

  Mrs.Conceited
07/19/08 (04:47 PM) 
Whoa...I didn't expect to be speechless, although I know you have that capabiiltiy with youremotional writes. All I can say is 10 starz and I know it's not the same, but for what it's worth, you have a mother as long as my mom is still breathing.

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