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".visually."
  by Lord Mason Da Rula




I Want You - Marvin Gaye

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.visually.

seductive sensuals
sliding slow

..crawling..

crumpled fabric
between fingertips

eyes examining
each and every
erogenous enclave
ecstatically

ardent desire
revealing keen impatience
feeling convenient

eagerness
envelopes
entirely

..focus flickers..

entrancing erotics
entice

coax & capture
cerebral cogitation

imagining intoxicating
imagery

brought forth
by you
physically

.mentally.

&

.visually.

(((I Want You}}}


A Word

From'

Da

Lord

Mason Da Rula
copyrighted 2008
Diesel From Tha D Inc.






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Date Submitted: Jul 15, 2008 (12:04 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/19/08 (12:02 AM)
Author: Lord Mason Da Rula
Poem Title: .passionately. [addi...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (20)
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07/29/08 (02:41 PM) 
thoroough once again....the focus flickers line...that shit just conjures up wonderful thoughts...I dug this series...very consistent excellence depicted in your scripts

  harley quinn/a...
07/21/08 (11:15 AM) 
very choose worthy in your choose of words , nicely done ...as if painting imagines upon a canvas

  Shadowed Thoug...
07/20/08 (02:45 AM) 
man right off the bat you start with some serious descriptions "seductive sensuals sliding slow ..crawling.. crumpled fabric between fingertips" perfect description...very vivid. "eagerness envelopes entirely" wow....you made me feel that! well damn after reading this i could understand why "i want you" lol....i know you want me boo. *smiles* you must've been thinking of your goddess when you wrote this *wink* i really love this write.

  ephemeral
07/17/08 (11:19 PM) 
Well now... that was as sensual as could be...whew...the song already brings up enough thougths and images but what you added to it took it to a completely different level.

  N~Tyce
07/17/08 (01:22 PM) 
wow your wordplay here is brilliant and sensual. i love your flow and amazing talent here. i enjoyed this one. 10!

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