to allow you to travel back
&/or maybe forward
in time..
maybe not to right a wrong..
but to re[live] a moment?!?
capture it one more time...
submerge yourself in the bestest of best times....
because changing the past
only eliminates learning thee lesson..
Because now choices have been made
Decisions have been followed
Life has set in
So much pride that was never swallowed
allowing you to make thee mistake again
in the P R E S E N T
the future...
I wish that time could be returned back where it was
.sighs.
& sometimes I just want to
fast-forward time..
to get past the stalemate
i seem to be trapped in knowing that...
A bad decision made for a good reason is still
a bad decision
A good decision made for a bad reason is too still
a bad decision
I would do all the calculations....there are definitely some memories that I would love to recapture. Recently, I had an instance take place of remember and it became a reality to me suddenly when it turned out to be a memory. I looked at it as though it had happened yesterday.
i loved this piece...it made me smile...the subtle lines that could be easily missed..."so much pride that was never swallowed"...it packs a punch, but feels light...nice vibe in the piece...nice presentation with the lines...your intellect is evident...awesome
OHHHH shit,,,you super sick with the word play "a decision made for a good reason is still a bad decision/a good decision made for a bad reason is too still a bad decision ..... oh DAMN that was sooo FlIPP'N COOL ...str8 up LMAO yo keep that 10 shit coming
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