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"THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT"
  by oj
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The lights was eclipsed into a dim tint
The room captivated a romantic vanilla scent

As R Kelly sang his song in the background
She was standing next to the bed of a velvet cloud

Staring at me with the eyes of a predator watching it's prey
With a cunning "Come get this" grin emerged on her face

She let her silk robe slowly crawl down her body like the white peddals falling from a dogwood tree
Lookin at a beautiful female form of Gods creation a ora of lust fell upon me
With her scrumptious perky breast with harden chocolate eyes staring at me

As my eyes scanned to the curve of her abdomin which widen to her hips
Down to her brown flowered lips

She walked up to me as our bodies meet for the thousandth time
As I felt my inner muscle slowly rise

She slowly undressed me as our lips connected slow dancing to our own rhythm of motion
I became high off of her suductive potion

My hands caress down her spine like a raindrop shrinkling down a window pane
While my mouth kissed down to her neck leaving a hicky stain

Picking her up as we fall upon the bed
Feeling the impatience of my third leg

I entered through her door which she welcomed me inside the warmth of her
I felt her warm and grace of moistness inside her
As I slowly insert her
With each stroke getting deeper and deeper
While our breathing is getting steeper and steeper

Feeling her sensation as she's feeling mines
As the passion intertwines

With each stroke feeling better than the last
Reaching the climax of the mountian peak was our only task

As she respond with satifaction from the force of my stoke feeling the pain of pleasure
As it became more deeper and faster my pipe build pressure

Feeling her walls getting tighter and tighter and then

Then

We exploded together

Falling to mercy from the pleasure that won over our bodies in the heat of the night

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Date Submitted: Jan 28, 2008 (08:31 PM)
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  ~Unpredictable...
04/13/08 (01:05 AM) 
ok..................... umm....ok... yeah I see your erotics are as vivd as mines are.. This was a great scribe hon.... WOW a really good /great scribe.. I see yu have alot of viewers too so I can tell by that....that you have a massive following.....Very NICE!!!!!

  Big Country
04/12/08 (12:25 AM) 
WOW...ummm...ok....yea i really don't know what to say...i'm speechless!!! That was amazing...great write!!! 10 starz

  tamara843chuck...
03/25/08 (10:14 AM) 
i love dat..i am speechless on this poem..you are good wit cha words......10 starz

  Daiintee
03/23/08 (05:28 PM) 
Oh .. umm..speechless on da detailz.. 10 starahz

  Rella-Roo #1
03/21/08 (01:21 PM) 
very very very good 10 starz.

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