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"Tears/Smiles"
  by .candice.



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Tears
saline, salty
falling, trickling, forming
outburst, emotional ,illuminating, sunshine
uplifting, brighting, purifying
hopeful, glimmering
Smiles

-reflect-

Smiles
glimmering , hopeful
purifying, brighting, uplifting
sunshine, illuminating, emotional, outburst
forming, trickling, forming
salty, saline
Tears


*For every smile
We shed a tear.*
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Date Submitted: Jun 03, 2008 (01:03 AM)
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  Dreshawn
08/13/08 (08:41 PM) 
I liked everything style to the smile...Loved the song choice. It had a certain unattainable elegance about. Pure and Simple ... IDK. I just speechless right now...Thanks for Sharing. Oh and the last part...For every smile We Shed a tear. Thats very deep.

  harley quinn/a...
07/28/08 (06:34 AM) 
I enjoyed the style and word play ... but I seem to shed two tears for every one smiling , much lov.. angel

  shyeboogie
06/05/08 (03:54 AM) 
wpw...nothing but respect....and u misses nothing but truth word up

  JIGGABYRD
06/03/08 (02:03 AM) 
ok. i aint writing nuffin else till i get dat shit man...

  One
06/03/08 (01:11 AM) 
stop repostin!!!

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