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"Spirit Walk"
  by the struggle


7/23/08

standing in the woods
time
slows to a crawl
slipping in and out of
rhythm with the pulse
in my chest.

a babbling brook to my left,
softly whispers secrets
as ancient as rhyme itself.

speaks of when the earth
was new, pure and innocent
like a infant fawn
taking its first steps.

i walk deeper, savoring
the sensation of the wind
permeating the pores
of my consciousness.

the feel of the ground
beneath my bare feet
binding my soul all the closer
with every step i take.

closer...and closer still,
with every step i take.

-DL Martin

Dreaming By The Stream - Dan Gibsons Solitudes

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Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 (12:04 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/24/08 (12:12 AM)
Author: Group: Unique Mental
Poem Title: Spirit Walk

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comment icon  COMMENTS (13)
  Tpoet
09/27/08 (10:07 PM) 
beautifully calming write

  King.Shadow(Le...
09/03/08 (01:13 AM) 
nice nice... scenery song most perfect add and the piano most excellent add man... feels like awalk through a tropical forest... nicely done

  alastor
08/18/08 (09:53 PM) 
Man diggin the settling ambiance. The weightlessness of the tranquility could have carried me to some foreign utopia of the kind I've only seen in dreams. At one with nature in it's purest form always gets my soul into a sanctuary-type atmosphere; though I haven't been in a while. This poem reminds me that I should never look away & must always return to view the brimming voice of lord exposed right before my wandering eyes. Thanks alot for the great piece

  AzIz
08/11/08 (11:52 PM) 
Gorgeous write...so eloquently scripted. I can relate. Sometimes nature...life...reality can be so overwhelmingly beautiful and surreal

  diamondNfudge
08/05/08 (11:01 PM) 
this is a beautiful write. this is poetry. very insiteful. nice.....

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