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"Sour Patches"
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Sucking sour bits
bitter sweet relations kid
can't patch connections



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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (01:01 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/20/08 (06:42 AM)
Author: Syndel
Poem Title: Gummie Bears

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comment icon  COMMENTS (17)
  Tpoet
09/25/08 (11:03 PM) 
hot write

  11th Wonduh
08/21/08 (10:58 AM) 
deeper meaning, clever usage of the metaphor& of course this stp compliments this beautifully

  D.K. ( aka Dar...
08/20/08 (05:43 PM) 
DANG ONE... AND YA DIDNT SAVE ME NONE WATS GOING DOWN... LOL.. NICE FLOW THO... DK

  Tha Scorpion
08/20/08 (12:55 PM) 
Although most see the humor of this, as well as I, I also see a deeper meaning too!

  Disoriented Di...
08/20/08 (12:54 PM) 
very witty indeed cool...hmm onto the other responses lmao...smh

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