last line did it for me... faved... nothing more need to be said. ; )

Very nicely done miss. Sensual and eloquent. Exactly the kind of eroticism I find the most appreciation for.

the sexuality doesnt over power the sensuality of this haiku.... I love this piece....... just enriches your mind and take you on journeys... the kinky kind..lol.... well written xperience

Jeez your haikus are so complex and intricately....created..nicely done

Heavy-handed/hearted Haiku from Heavyweight ErotiXist herself