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"Shes mind twisted *Lex*"
  by NICKY BOO
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Confused by Lil Lexis


Up all night talking to him,
But the one you love on your mind,
You say you love him,

But how can you, be so sure,

But so confused

Ask yourself is this love, or selfishness?

Or maybe insecurities or fear of someone you may miss.

Ive been here before, so theres no one to blame,

Just natural confusion, but with a little pain.

You know if he knew about the doubts of your love for him,

H'ed be hurt and betrayed of you trying to pretend,

But your only human, you didnt mean any harm,

Its just with so much confusion, we wouldnt get very far,

Its not right, but its not wrong,

Just figure out your wants and needs

before

confusion comes along.

*Ahh mann weve ALL been through it...enuf said*
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Date Submitted: Aug 13, 2008 (03:42 AM)
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  Rissa14
08/15/08 (08:52 PM) 
yehh like you said, we've all been through it, unfortunate enough. lol. dagg wish it didnt have to be like that though. being confused and having different thoughts in your head..its juss kinda like..watttt? lol. ten stars xoxo ♥Rissa

  ♥Poetic~...
08/14/08 (08:06 PM) 
the perfect response. nicely penned diva. and yes we have all been there before

  daidai_dts4l
08/14/08 (12:08 AM) 
dis was a KICK ASS RESPONSE!!! lol great write 10starz

  bookum
08/13/08 (04:35 PM) 
damn i gotta agree with lexis...this the perfect response...enuff said.

  Lil Lexis
08/13/08 (03:38 PM) 
Aww sis I love this! It's the perfect response yo! You described it perfectly and said all of the things i needed to hear... You're right about this.. 10 stars yo.. I freakin love it! I gotta fav this no doubt

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