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".rawness."
  by .Jaded Noble.


.rawness.

I spit legendary shit
called me the lost city of Atlantis
cause I sink all you haters
doing it profoundly outlandish
ya'll can't stand it
how venomous my diction
it causes friction
bubbling like hot grease
my nigga get out the kitchen

my words straight flamethrower
the game's over
run you down like The Rock
peeling out in a Range Rover
begging for mercy
"it ain't over"
reign down destruction
signifying the end of times
cause I blow more shit up than a supernova

throw up the roc like HOVA
but this ain't no dynasty
I wanna be
the finest me
spit illogically
logically
ya'll aint knockin ME!
never ever stoppin thee
metaphorical prodigy
from what I can be

The illest of the ill poets
sick with the pen
and now you all better know it

~1
.jaded noble. ©2008
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Date Submitted: Aug 16, 2008 (09:32 PM)
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  TRU-IN-DEED
08/19/08 (11:48 PM) 
Pretty impressive jaded. I am always prone 2 a good freestyle write. - T.I.D.

  Philo
08/17/08 (01:02 AM) 
my bad botu the second comment, lol...my computer kept freezing and i thought it hadn't posted so i went back and tried posting it again and i just realized that it had actually went through!!! great work though. my apologies

  Philo
08/17/08 (01:01 AM) 
great work, i'm feeling a lot of your poems...be sure to check out some of mine and let me know what you think...i'd appreciate it. i'm pretty new to the site, but the site is amazing..and your work is incredible...look forward to reading more. :-) later

  Philo
08/17/08 (12:48 AM) 
great work, i'm feeling a lot of your poems...be sure to check out some of mine and let me know what you think...i'd appreciate it. i'm pretty new to the site, but the site is amazing..and your work is incredible...look forward to reading more. :-) later

  .Candice.(Roll...
08/17/08 (12:15 AM) 
that was a nice spit.... kid who are you.. cuz.. damn... you over here really getting it in.. second poem i read nad you got it :)

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