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"Poetry you raped me"
  by angeleyes1


Poetry you took my thoughts,
You took every line I told,
You raped me bare of,
The words I was about to unfold,

Poetry you came out of the darkness,
And raped my mind,
I'm at a loss of words,
Words I now can't find,

Poetry you raped me,
Of all the words I inspire,
So now I guess you,
Will be all I desire,

Poetry you took away,
Every one of my needs,
For these words and thoughts,
Is all I had to succeed,

Poetry you raped my mind,
Of every word I thought,
So now left without nothing,
Poetry, I will now take your heart!
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Date Submitted: Aug 12, 2008 (01:23 PM)
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  foremanlin
11/03/08 (10:14 AM) 
I understand this, poetry has a knack for taking things from us, time, and many other things. I hope you get your ish back. fave

  pRÖdîçÅLSôn² 
10/23/08 (06:31 PM) 
DATS WASSUP MA...I LOVE THE FLUISITY OF YOUR WORDS...KEEP DOING YOUR THANG MA...TEN STARZ FROM THE SON!!!!

  ash_g
10/16/08 (10:35 AM) 
hmmmm....deep write....i dig this!!!!!and also i know how this feels.lol poetry is my husband...and i love him he don't argue...lol >.< *****10*****

  DaddysGirl
10/12/08 (07:42 PM) 
A very deep & intense write. You did your thing with this. I can definitely feel what you're expressing. Nicely done~Much Love~

  Tpoet
10/12/08 (01:59 PM) 
WOW very powerful write thats whats up love it

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