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"Poetic Confrontation Generalization"
  by Shaboogie


Got me all riled up my panties are in a bunch
Don't he know I eat faggot ass nikkas like him for lunch?
I write because I need to
Like a fish needs gills to breathe
And Imma never leave
no sir not this time
call it devine
intervention
and in case i forgot to mention
I ain't no rapper, far from an emcee
with me what you get is what you see
Im a poets poet player
The microphone slayer
And you ain't even got a prayer
You's a swagger jacker
Probably a fudge packer
one of them DL brothers
don't think I don't know
your tough boy act is all for show
Your flows is borrowed
your callabos is weak
you don't mesh well
So how the fuck is it you numba one week after week
And we don't speak
not because I think you are beneath me
but beacuse i surround myself with poets who can teach me
how to be a better writer
how to develop my skill
You turn constructive criticism into beef and it's starting to make me physically ill
Ya need to chill shorty
stop trying to run with the big bois
Making a whole lotta noise
about nada
See i felt the need to I really gotta
let you know that tho you may not find me to be the best
I know you you wouldn't step to me and put my skills to the test
if you do bring a vest
my words will come piercing through your chest
faster than any bullet and twice as deadly
you just a fan like bobby deniro and wesley
Know your place
Show some respect
Before I give you a poetic chin check
The hate gives me the strength I need to weild this pen
Please don't make me have to ever address you again
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Date Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 (09:26 AM)
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  --->ROXIE<---
08/22/08 (03:16 PM) 
WELL GOT DAMN!!! IM LIKE EVERYONE ELSE...WHO THE FUCK DONE PISSED IN UR CHERIOS??? LMFAO...WHY DON'T U TELL HIM HOW U REALLY FEEL??? DAAAAAAAAMMMMMNNNN *IN MY CRAIG AND SMOKEY FROM FRIDAY VOICE* THIS WAS HOT

  RUBY RED DBL R
08/20/08 (05:26 PM) 
*catches the holy ghost and runs around the comment box* wtf is going on??? do i have to go in???? honestly i will go inn asap.... they must not know about you..... you better not leave sis..... you did the last time and i was mad, you etter not leave because of the inbox instigators.....grrr where they at?? bring em out!!!!!

  Syndel
08/19/08 (06:47 PM) 
well damn I hope they got the message def skill in this write the flow and the energy are def on point this is my fav tag *Your flows is borrowed ** damn that hurt OUCH !!!!! much respect I hope you dont have to address again

  DaRk KnIgHt
08/19/08 (10:48 AM) 
LMAO AT DIS.. WHOEVER YA TALKIN BOUT.. WELL MMM YEAH BEST I NOT ASK I RECKON.. BUT HOT ANYWAY.. NICE ONE DK..

  Kat Nicole
08/19/08 (09:53 AM) 
well you gave whomever this is about the poetic business.. like very raw. i like this. sometimes we have to use the piece to check someone into understanding. this poetry thing is an art not to be taken lightly... nice work. gets 10 starzz from me -Kat

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