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COMMENTER |
POEM |
COMMENT DATE |
COMMENT |
| 1 |
Noir |
Do I Wanna Make Love or Do I Wanna Fuck |
08/20/08 (07:19 AM) |
I try not to leave that many comments for the erotica poems because it seems alot of people always leave comments. I had to leave one for this simply because of the title. There is a difference in fucking and making love, but i think it depends on the people in the relationship. Personally good sex is good sex, and either if We do it slow and soft or rough and hard , if I llove you it will show. This was an awesome piece. |
| 2 |
BxGrL |
Call me out |
08/20/08 (07:18 AM) |
This poem is soo deep. To bad she couldnt be the woman you needed her to be. 10 stars. Dont stp writing. Love ya work. |
| 3 |
Noir |
Life |
08/20/08 (07:13 AM) |
I love the way you put all of these quotes and cliches together in this poem. Very good word play. Those are sayings we have all heard, and come to think about it I have never seen them all in the same place at once. Again excellent word play. |
| 4 |
Brokenvegtable |
Outburst, in Finale |
08/20/08 (07:06 AM) |
i love it what a great peice i some way it reminds of resident evil but the would be the visual i get but im not sure why.... upon further though into it i have to say it really reminds me of a type of passion a rage of passion and the feeling is very warm not like rage but like intense emotion.... i always love reading you and to me that will never get old i might be bias but i dont care i know great poetry when i read it :) thanks for writing this and allowing me to see it as your words alway hold more then meets the eye .....it was my honor to read this and my pleasure to comment on it for you |
| 5 |
DL Martin |
The Harsh Reality’s of a Sick Mind |
08/20/08 (07:05 AM) |
*takes breath* I've always enjoyed your more serious writes, but this one...speaks so much of a vicious cycle. For the man's mind to become so twisted like that, and then to slowly break her down again...and again, until there's nothing left...this one will stick w/ me. I'll have to come back for the other after work...well done queen. |
| 6 |
BxGrL |
Can I Offer You Some Cunnilingus? |
08/20/08 (06:55 AM) |
Wow......I can definitely see it. Keep the mind going and the pen flowin. |
| 7 |
Syndel |
Sour Patches |
08/20/08 (06:42 AM) |
your crazy .....I love it |
| 8 |
Lara |
Dark Hero |
08/20/08 (06:40 AM) |
i love it! |
| 9 |
>~~ EaSterN Queen~~< |
FUCK YO STRUCTURE! (I'M FREE) |
08/20/08 (06:39 AM) |
I really enjoy the way you write. It is refreshing to read someone who respects themselves in there creativity. I have to say, I had to laugh at Trust Roxie never swallows.. Bitch I just Spit!!! love to bring you over here to the Uk. Introduce to a few people who need to be introduced to your realism. mind I dont think they would be able to take it. |
| 10 |
Lara |
Water |
08/20/08 (06:39 AM) |
again, very beautiful and poetic expressed with such simple words |
| 11 |
Lara |
Fire |
08/20/08 (06:38 AM) |
this is strong, simple and beautiful... i love it |
| 12 |
Lara |
True Love |
08/20/08 (06:36 AM) |
very sweet |
| 13 |
>~~ EaSterN Queen~~< |
Deprived |
08/20/08 (06:36 AM) |
lol. i understand where you are at. |
| 14 |
>~~ EaSterN Queen~~< |
NO RINGTONE 4 DADDY |
08/20/08 (06:35 AM) |
If this is your little girl she is lovely Roxie.I really understand everything you are saying because I to have been there with my son. This was an open honest piece. All i can say is she is lucky to have you as a mum. Keem smiling because you are doing a good job. |
| 15 |
>~~ EaSterN Queen~~< |
Flat-lined --- Hip Hop In My Mind.... |
08/20/08 (06:30 AM) |
This is a journey for me, comming from the uk.I dont really know much about hip hop or what it was like before but what i can feel from this write is someone who feel passionately about it. I loved the way you laid this out, the music and i enjoyed reading your work. |
| 16 |
>~~ EaSterN Queen~~< |
ACT OUT |
08/20/08 (06:27 AM) |
You are a very creative writer, I have not read much of your work but i can see from just reading this that you are very talented. I will have to read more of your work. |
| 17 |
BxGrL |
My Side of a Rape |
08/20/08 (06:24 AM) |
Wow this poem is powerful. I felt the pain and sadness in it. You write great. Dont stop writing. |
| 18 |
>~~ EaSterN Queen~~< |
matching socks |
08/20/08 (06:23 AM) |
This piece was beautiful, I read in and was engrossed the whole time.I can indeed see where you are comming from and understand why you feel the way you do. I really enjoyed reading this because it has some depth to it. It was indeed a nice drop. |
| 19 |
>~~ EaSterN Queen~~< |
why ya leavin...? |
08/20/08 (06:20 AM) |
I cant believe that you are going, you are such an increidible poet. I admire and look up to you having only been writing for such a short space of time. 2damnreal, dont do it!! Suuwuu , I have not read any of your work, love the way you flow and this was jus exceptional your words were emotional deep and strong at the same time. Im going to have to look in and read more of your writes. This was a beautiful yet sat write. well done to both poets. |
| 20 |
Syndel |
Selective Hearing |
08/20/08 (06:19 AM) |
Ahh Angel this def hits home I talk and talk until I am blue in the face but I have learned how to get my voice heard I leave a damn note on the bathroom mirror he will actually read and then we discuss what ever works as long as you are heard both good and bad must have communication by two excellent write |
| 21 |
>~~ EaSterN Queen~~< |
Darkness and Light |
08/20/08 (06:16 AM) |
Im with Tru in deed, yes two very different writing styles come togethe yet creating something that was incredible here. You both gelled together It was an creative, flowed well, and left me wanting more. |
| 22 |
Syndel |
Be Here. |
08/20/08 (06:15 AM) |
you and Blakfiya are def on the same note and you know this is wonderful love to see you in this spirit of yeah ....an music is hot |
| 23 |
Syndel |
Find Time |
08/20/08 (06:13 AM) |
Find a way to shift gears, wipe tears, review years * this is just what I am doing not sitting any longer waiting I have to keep it moving excellent scribe |
| 24 |
cybersamm |
Death Of A Man |
08/20/08 (06:13 AM) |
so .. your heavily in transit at the moment mase death to life .....and vice versa your wordsmith-ship is outstanding and truely inspiring you have such a wonderful and diverse way with your art mase and i admire every word you pen.....from one world to another keep your chin up and that top lip stiff..xxx hearts |
| 25 |
Syndel |
Real Recognize Real |
08/20/08 (06:11 AM) |
I dont think I have ever read something from you with such fire so that person better take the hint and keep it moving |
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