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"peer pressure"
  by Saunsia


peer pressure is a lie
that only resides
in you
and wat you choose to do...
no one can make you change yo style,
be someone your not,
tell you let go,
and lose everything you got...
we are the future,
a new generation,
and our expectations,
will once be law,
and no on can command you,
unless you let them demand you,
to do wat they say do...
we got values
and we got dreams, too.
but that can all perish
in one fatal swoop...
aint nothin wrong wit standin apart,
showin you got heart
enough not to take part,
in the madness of suicide,
that caused so many to die,
cause you trusted a lie,
a lie called peer pressure...
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Date Submitted: Jul 19, 2008 (03:44 PM)
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  Lyricsista
09/18/08 (03:04 PM) 
truth spo0ken right here! so real! my fav line(s)"noone can command you/unless they demand you" i'm really feelin y a style...keep doin ya thang!

  Jewseph
09/18/08 (11:30 AM) 
DAMM I LOVE THAT ONE ,YOUR TOO RIGHT ,I HAVE A 16YR DAUGHTER AND THATS THE ONE THING THAT SCARES MEE AT NIGHT......

  LiL Chris 13
07/20/08 (01:30 PM) 
I feel you keep expressing your anger cause when you do it makes your write heart felt just like this 1 but nice write again

  H.H. Holloway
07/20/08 (12:36 PM) 
I kept hearing teen angst just a little in this one--your talent lies in the ability to use your youth as your greatest weapon--youth can sometimes be a double-edged sword, but sometimes that is a good thing--youth is used to help us learn more of ourselves and others as we continue to grow into adulthood--it's the lessons that we learn in our youth that strengthen us in the years to come--10!!!

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