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"PEACE: Fully"
  by H.H. Holloway
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Making Peace. by .Candice.Renee.


P-ositioning myself for the attempts
at catching your broken heart
that seems to have shattered
by the heartache and pain

E-venly echoed from your past
discontent of lost hope and angry
vents that have caused you to
appear distant and evil

A-lways I stand by you as a friend
never a miscreant, seeking to
manipulate your weakness for
the kind of love that all women appreciate

C-radle your tears inside of my open palms
consider every broken promise
that you've had to endure and assure you
that there are still real men out there, that care

E-ver and always-- please believe that I'm sincere
when I say that I pray for your happiness to
drown out the bad luck and hang-ups --don't hang up
your heart --for bad things never last for-ever
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Date Submitted: Aug 16, 2008 (02:55 AM)
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  getchamndrite
08/20/08 (06:39 PM) 
soooo sweet and caring. i can feel what you feel for this person. very nice write. make u just wanna hug somebody lol

  One
08/20/08 (02:18 AM) 
very heartfelt....sentimental as well as affectionate....whoever was in mind when you wrote this...you can tell they are very dear to your heart

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
08/18/08 (01:48 PM) 
I can really appreciate this piece, and thank you for confirming the existence of a MAN in this...

  King.Shadow(Le...
08/17/08 (01:05 AM) 
raw really sick constructed write especially for an acrostic very raw wordplay here 10 stars and a fav as welll

  .Candice.(Roll...
08/17/08 (12:47 AM) 
just heart touching... very heart touching.

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