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"path to redemption"
  by B.R


crying alone - Kajiura Yuki


walking for many miles
trying to end this journey
on this broken road

life..my broken home
cant seem to let my hair down
with this broken comb

feelings of pain shown
laughing faces turned to stone
just left me to roam

alone..i suppose
continuing down this road
life...no grip or hold

on reality
endless immortality
just surrounding me

but astoundingly
it seems God's still crowning me
what was found in me?

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Date Submitted: Aug 16, 2008 (12:11 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/16/08 (02:33 PM)
Author: smooch
Poem Title: im here

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comment icon  COMMENTS (19)
  kintrell09
11/08/08 (06:56 AM) 
I REALLY LIKE THIS, SOMETIMES I FEEL THE SAME WAY

  HoneyB
11/07/08 (12:49 PM) 
that was deep and beautiful nice write i enjoyed reading this 10strzz

  cookedcoke02
08/21/08 (09:32 AM) 
profound....this is a great write.....its mos def a beautiful piece.. 10 starsz

  Just Me...
08/19/08 (01:47 PM) 
Beautiful piece. Sounds like you've been through and still go through a lot... and even still you see the blessings and ask, why me? I loved this one. Keep writing. :)

  angeleyes1
08/18/08 (10:06 AM) 
very beautiful write words flowed so smooth lots of deep emotion in this keep flowing much love

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