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"Passionately"
  by .violent.



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Maybe erotic maybe not.
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Our
.
.
.
.
.
bodies
.
writhing in
anticipation
while
sweltering whispers
annunciated within
silent serenades
share
.
sensually seducing
secrets amongst
alluring eyes
.
.
and eventually
.
.
comfy cavities
shall
fluently surrender
succulent trickling
secretions
.
.
saturating
&
slightly liberating
.
.
being
blissfully
romanced
.
.
severely
entranced
.
within
.
resounding echoes
from thundering love claps
giving a round of applause
.
.
[------pause-------]
.
.
{because I like how you}
.
.
diligently study my body
.
intimately
.
passionately
.
stroking
&
shifting
my soul
.
slowly
giving me
tid bits of heaven
.
.
sinning
.
.
while vainly
screaming sweet Jesus
.
fervently swapping sweat
&
reaching higher heights
.
.
together we
exonerate emotions
feeling exalted
knowing
.
.
this is closest
we've ever been to God
...

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Date Submitted: Apr 01, 2008 (01:30 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (37)
  Hyphy
10/17/08 (12:53 AM) 
Nice. Very nice.

  SupremeStar130
10/13/08 (10:32 AM) 
Oh now this is hot. its a sensous erotica. not too explicit but very seductive. good job but based on the number of comments u already knoq that lol

  mingmei
09/06/08 (07:37 PM) 
hell yeah..very nice!

  move
08/26/08 (04:23 AM) 
"Thundering love claps giving a round of applause"... vivid expression. takes me to a place where i once loved.

  Lisa20
08/20/08 (10:02 PM) 
Nice n sensual n hot too. ha ha nice work poet

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