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".passionately. [addicted]"
  by Lord Mason Da Rula
  - This Poem is a response to the poem .visually. by Lord Mason Da Rula


*continuing the series*


Sisqo - Addicted - Sisqo


.passionately. [addicted]

sitting
silently
studiously
seeing
strong
sentiments

come to fruition

...like...

....cinematic visions

release from
a streamline
dream-like prison

ruthlessly reacting
my each and every
revision

of my
complex decisions

completely altering
the subtle nuisances
of the way
in which
I'm living

strung out
for your love
fiending
like I'm
addicted

(((baby)))

I need another hit

inject it into my arms

.passionately.

watch
as it
fuses with
my being
causing me
act
irrationally

soul tweaked

spazzing out

heart geeked

as your love
sweeps me
off my feet

consuming
every fiber
seemingly
making me
complete

for this love.....

nothing man made
can ever be as sweet.......

A Word

From

Da

Lord

Mason Da Rula
Copyrighted 2008
Diesel Tha D Inc
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Date Submitted: Jul 19, 2008 (12:02 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/23/08 (12:14 AM)
Author: Lord Mason Da Rula
Poem Title: .physically.

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comment icon  COMMENTS (10)
  One
07/29/08 (02:39 PM) 
sentiments come to fruition ...like... ....cinematic visions release from a streamline dream-like prison <-----Yup....love the thoughts you conjure up in this piece....especially in this line

  a fallen angel
07/21/08 (11:12 AM) 
it was very articulate and flowed upon your words .very verbally beautiful ...i must say ...mase

  imperfect beau...
07/20/08 (09:01 PM) 
ahhhh simply beautiful, for lack of a better word..positively gorgeous in all its elaborate relaying!

  blessed92297
07/19/08 (11:11 PM) 
Smooth, real gentle and caressing to my ears. I enjoyed this passionate piece.

  Blakfiya
07/19/08 (10:44 PM) 
This is grown. Get ya fill.

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