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"PAIN OF HEAVEN"
  by Lil Lexis
  - This Poem is a response to the poem HEAVEN'S KISS by Lil Lexis


.. Heaven..

Not nearly equable
Is this feeling to anything
I've felt before
With your voice
I lose oxygen
My chest is heaving for more

.. Heven ..

Butterflies?
Thats what Im use to
But this feeling
Is something new

.. Heaven ..

Painstaking
Your hand around my heart
I can feel
The sensation its making

.. Heaven..

The line disconnected
Yet your hand still there
As I stare
At my ceiling picturing you
And with this pain in my chest
Unsure of what to do


.. Heaven ..

Unnecessary Attitude
Habitually rude
Detrimental to this relationship
Ready to change because i dont need it
You're a different type of dude
Than what Im accustomed to

.. Heaven ..

Anticipating your presence
Ever since
Your last departure
Eagerly looking towards tomorrow
This new pain im
Learning to accept
Your hand around my heart
as it beats in my chest

.. Heaven ..
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Date Submitted: Jul 18, 2008 (03:03 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/19/08 (02:29 AM)
Author: Lil Lexis
Poem Title: ON HEAVEN'S ROOFTOP

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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  Mrs.Conceited
07/19/08 (04:42 PM) 
All I can say is you too are effortlessly amazing. 1000000 starz

  MZ.Philosophy
07/18/08 (11:49 AM) 
aww sis wow....these heaven dude is something serious....10stars

  NICKY BOO
07/18/08 (11:25 AM) 
awww look at ma lil sis gettin all deep and what not...lexi keep growin boo...iqua loves u!! ten starz

  Asia_17
07/18/08 (03:34 AM) 
I really liked this, because it mixed the pain and happiness

  KiNg-Go0B3r
07/18/08 (03:07 AM) 
hhhmmmmm u make me so damn proouud booboo u be gettin so much better n this is different from u

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