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"ON HEAVEN'S ROOFTOP"
  by Lil Lexis
  - This Poem is a response to the poem PAIN OF HEAVEN by Lil Lexis


The breathtaking view of the city
along with the airs damp heat
plus the risk of getting caught
on top of this building
ignited the fire between you and me

A blaze
only to be extinguished by
the drenching moisture
in between my thighs
As I
Step out of my shorts slowly
bending over...
to you my moisture showing

Leaning on the window sill for support
Engulfing my fountain in flames
Your tongue a burning torch
Failing to exasperate the dripping
Combined with the immense heat...
I felt my conscience slipping..

Moments from ecstasy
You Pause. . .
Put your face next to me
Engage in a kiss
Yearning now to feel Heaven's Bliss

P e r f e c t i o n
Watching your Heavenly juices drip
Appearing so appetizing
I wanted to lick...
Drenched in sweat.. needing to regroup
Stepped out to enjoy the breeze on the roof
Along with the view

Staring down at Queens below
Are those cop cars?
Now maybe we should go
17 floors down
Of the passion on the rooftop
the tenants will never know...
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Date Submitted: Jul 19, 2008 (02:29 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/21/08 (11:38 PM)
Author: Lil Lexis
Poem Title: HOLDIN DOWN HEAVEN

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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  Butterfly Chil...
07/22/08 (01:08 AM) 
damn sis... u cant be puttin up writes like this lol... H0T flow!!!... i see heaven got u sprung =]

  cocoadiva
07/19/08 (07:15 PM) 
wow.. get it... lol ... great write...

  Mrs.Conceited
07/19/08 (04:44 PM) 
You need a whoopin! lol I'm tellin! Nah, I'm just kidding, this was ill.

  MZ.Philosophy
07/19/08 (01:53 PM) 
lol ima beat your ass lil sis...but anyway good write 10stars

  B. Rose
07/19/08 (09:22 AM) 
This was very sensual Lexis... but you too young t be engaging in ll that.... lol.... hot piece though babygirl...

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