why view my work when u don't comment
im winning the most views contest
just confused..why click n leave
why even go to my page if you don't read
what's the point of a showcase
when my work ends up in a broken vase
I know its not about a fan base
but damn...just comment..u don't have 2 rate
u don't gotta like it..but say it to my face
keep it real n ill embrace
I don't get it..how cud so many people do this
I guess ur the people it amuses
poetry abusers
beggers can't be choosers..but comment no excuses
flow might not be the sickest or most ruthless
but I know im steady n it cruises
fuck what ya said...gs is dying
people stopped trying...poem stealing an lying
moving up the list..bullshit buying
poets turned rappers..like there's a chance for signing
this is more then rhyming
fuck it ill wait to see da views stack
no comments but fuck it..ill respond back..1
Ha Ha!! muh-fucka how you gon be a hypacrite? or how ever you spell that! you just wrote a response poem-which you didnt comment! but this was hot! flow-PREFECT. ten from me
you said that shit... i dont think gs is dying though, i think we all just have a long way to go and we need to make things the way they used to be. but all in all good scribe.
WOW....FEELIN' DIS FLOW & WORDPLAY....ME & MY BOY WUZ JUST SAYING THAT ABOUT DIS SITE...LIKE HOW DA FUCK CAN I HAVE 186 VIEWS &5 COMMENTS....LIKE REALLY?...IT MAKES ME THINK PEOPLE DON'T WANNA GIVE PROPS WHERE THEY ARE DO...ARE THEY JUST ;LIKE TO READ ABOUT DRAMA & MISERY ..& WHEN IT'S NOT WRITTEN...THEY AREN'T INTERESTED...I FEEL DIS RITE 100%.....THANX FOR SPEAKING UP...AGAIN UR FLOW WUZ MAGNIFICENT...& WORDPLAY..HAD ME FEELIN' DA FRUSTRATION