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"no feedback..niggas"
  by B.R


why view my work when u don't comment
im winning the most views contest
just confused..why click n leave
why even go to my page if you don't read
what's the point of a showcase
when my work ends up in a broken vase
I know its not about a fan base
but damn...just comment..u don't have 2 rate
u don't gotta like it..but say it to my face
keep it real n ill embrace

I don't get it..how cud so many people do this
I guess ur the people it amuses
poetry abusers
beggers can't be choosers..but comment no excuses
flow might not be the sickest or most ruthless
but I know im steady n it cruises

fuck what ya said...gs is dying
people stopped trying...poem stealing an lying
moving up the list..bullshit buying
poets turned rappers..like there's a chance for signing
this is more then rhyming

fuck it ill wait to see da views stack
no comments but fuck it..ill respond back..1

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Date Submitted: Aug 17, 2008 (02:35 PM)
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  smooch
08/18/08 (12:13 PM) 
damn ya write though everyone wants to rate ya but not comment what the hell good write

  ~* La Princesa...
08/17/08 (11:10 PM) 
Ha Ha!! muh-fucka how you gon be a hypacrite? or how ever you spell that! you just wrote a response poem-which you didnt comment! but this was hot! flow-PREFECT. ten from me

  touchdapearl2
08/17/08 (10:29 PM) 
well damn im over ol sckool snapping this was a true write indeed unlike my self i rnjoy reading poetry giving my feedback! this was on point

  Ms. Hollywood
08/17/08 (05:28 PM) 
you said that shit... i dont think gs is dying though, i think we all just have a long way to go and we need to make things the way they used to be. but all in all good scribe.

  HARLEMFINEST
08/17/08 (04:00 PM) 
WOW....FEELIN' DIS FLOW & WORDPLAY....ME & MY BOY WUZ JUST SAYING THAT ABOUT DIS SITE...LIKE HOW DA FUCK CAN I HAVE 186 VIEWS &5 COMMENTS....LIKE REALLY?...IT MAKES ME THINK PEOPLE DON'T WANNA GIVE PROPS WHERE THEY ARE DO...ARE THEY JUST ;LIKE TO READ ABOUT DRAMA & MISERY ..& WHEN IT'S NOT WRITTEN...THEY AREN'T INTERESTED...I FEEL DIS RITE 100%.....THANX FOR SPEAKING UP...AGAIN UR FLOW WUZ MAGNIFICENT...& WORDPLAY..HAD ME FEELIN' DA FRUSTRATION

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