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"New Beginnings"
  by DL Martin


8/5/08

As I sit here writing...no
Not writing, vibing.

I think about the the essence of poetry (to me)
A kaleidoscope of mentalities
Converging, providing

A whole new outlook,
Old strains subsiding.

Teaching this simple soul
The subtle values
Of rhyming

...

Helping me to grow
And to slowly realize

That within this persona
I've constructed
I can no longer abide

So I lay down my mask,
And set pretense to the side

Take up my pen and
Again begin to write

Freely breathing the poetic wind,
Learning to see with unveiled eyes.

A blank slate lies before me
As I leave "the struggle" far behind...

-DL Martin

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Date Submitted: Aug 05, 2008 (03:42 PM)
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  *@ngelic~Wordz...
10/28/08 (01:11 AM) 
very wonderfully written. i enjoyed this piece. beautiful talent you have. keep doing your thing. *smiles* much love poet.

  Rayve
09/30/08 (10:42 PM) 
Hmmmmmmm. I noticed u changed ur name. So this is the story behind it huh? Something kinda like what I did but I kept my name.......anywho. great write

  ComplexConfess...
09/18/08 (06:45 PM) 
Ah, i see.. is this write expressing the transition from your previous nickname to the one you have now? I thought you laid it out so beautifully. Especially when stating what poetry means to you and how it has helped in 'unveiling' the eyes. The ending was excellent.. "A blank slate lies before me" ..that line, binds the write to the title. Signifying a 'new beginning', free of all else. Lovely write!

  WIZ
09/13/08 (03:43 PM) 
so i lay down my mask, me to, but its scary when i'm me, anyway to the fools who can't see!! yeah!! yeah!! another slamming right on rockin rite!!! POWER TO MY PEOPLE!

  shyeboogie
09/11/08 (08:25 PM) 
you are truly a sage with your words...beatifully written fam

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