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"Never Back Down"
  by .Jaded Noble.


Never Back Down

separating self from consciousness
elements in this realm make me nauseous
sickening the air is as I breathe
toxic gas abhorrently diseased
beyond means

alone in a plagued world
wandering aimlessly
choking on the stifling environment
how my lungs peel and bleed
like picked scab wounds

concentration murdered perilously
societal sorrows
won't buy me a tomorrow
death is what I face
and everyone feeling enthralled

i don't give a fuck
how the changes in my duration
meta morph what I'm facing
never will I bend to infamy
never bowing down to complacement

I'll let ya'll walk the earth
mindlessly meddling morbidly
there's too much in living
a million and one things in store for me
so me backing down ever......

not even...


.jaded noble. ©2008
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Date Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 (12:51 PM)
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  Blakfiya
08/21/08 (11:27 AM) 
No, never do that. Needing to make a difference, to be different, is admirable. Never comply.

  TRU-IN-DEED
08/19/08 (11:44 PM) 
I gotta side with mason i too love the message of this piece. Something i firmly believe in and preach to those i care about. Very well done poet. - T.I.D.

  .Mase Da Rula.
08/19/08 (08:34 PM) 
i liked the wordplay.... and the overall message of never giving up.. truer words never been spoken

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