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"my true dad (i'm sorry)"
  by ash_g


he's been there through it all.
my ups.
my downs.
and times i thought i was cool.
man did i ever look like a fool.
he's saw me laugh.
he's seen me cry.
he saw me through days
both dark and bright.
he's always wanted me to do whats right.
he done what david (my supposed to be father)
couldn't and wouldn't do.
who woulda thought he'd step up
to the plate and take over a life
another man helped make.
he done this when i was a baby about 8months
and david tried to get in contact not once.
my dad darron,yes my true dad:
i know there was times i was bad
and said hurtful things that made
you shed a tear.
but
for you dad i'll always be here.
even if u just need someone's ear
to be heard.
i'm sorry sometimes i acted like a jerk
all you did was work
to make us a life.
i'm older now and i realize that.
I LOVE YOU DAD!
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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (04:10 AM)
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  WIZ
10/06/08 (09:02 AM) 
BET HE LOVES THIS RITE!! IT ROCKS! YOU SURE PUT YOUR HEART AN SOUL INTO YOUR RITES! AWLSOME TO THE UTMOST! SMILES!

  danceluv08
08/26/08 (01:41 AM) 
aww so true...great emotion felt in this write ..nice work keep em cumin..ten

  baby wiggles
08/21/08 (02:19 AM) 
i wish i had a dad to be there for me this is a nice write keep ya pen movin ten starz

  mz_April
08/20/08 (04:13 AM) 
awwww ashleth this is sooo sweet i know u really do love ur daddy!!! 10 starzzz girl keep up ya good work!

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