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"MY LIL SOULJA"
  by lil macc bucc


Only 2 days old
now he's turnin blue
from head to toe
his heart rate is droppin low
crying tears tellin them to save my kid
i knew you were my lil soulja then
back to his color
breathing fine
but still dont know how to eat
tube in his nose
hook up to heart montor
whats wrong with him
is it something i did wrong?
is he going to make it nobody knows.
My lil soulja
still staying strong
now 15 days old
learning how to eat on his own
but still not breathing right
heart rate keep droppin
still sitting there watchin
day in & day out
bout to go out of my mind
wanna take my lil mine home
now 27 days old
its feeding time
i walk in to hold arms and
thats when the doctors said
i can fianlly take my lil soulja home
i love you son.....
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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (06:29 AM)
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  after vision
10/11/08 (04:13 PM) 
this is short but covers a long and painful time in your life ending with joy untold

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