Nickname:DL Martin Country:United States City:Wherever My Mnd Takes Me... State:IN Gender:Male Age:21 Member Since:Mar 10, 2008 Last Login:Aug 20, 2008 Poems Submitted:30 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:432 Poem Views:2,317 Member Comments:93 Monthly Points:1,039,403,157 All-Time Points:4,800,351,911
*takes breath* I've always enjoyed your more serious writes, but this one...speaks so much of a vicious cycle. For the man's mind to become so twisted like that, and then to slowly break her down again...and again, until there's nothing left...this one will stick w/ me. I'll have to come back for the other after work...well done queen.
Commented on the poem "Okay" on 08/19/08 at 11:16 PM
a real...bittersweet write. I can actually relate, every so often I need to be reassured that everythings gonna be okay...
amen. I regret that I slept on u for so long poet. U really have something worthwhile to say...I'm beginning to enjoy your pen. Much love.
Commented on the poem "*~ Po3ts ~*" on 08/19/08 at 10:55 PM
haha, I loved this!! This is true on so many levels. I love the language u used as well, "cut across the fabric of the reality and diving deeper into the soul." *whistles* Beautiful. Definitely a fav.
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Commented on the poem "The Harsh Reality’s of a Sick Mind" on 08/20/08 at 07:05 AM
