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Commented on the poem "Thugz Mansion (EnJay'z Verse)" on 12/28/08 at 11:51 AM

damn im definitely feelin dis piece. i love thugz mansion && tupac and u definitely showed mad skillz in dis. the flow was tight, right, && on point. yu said some powerful things and had a really strong mansion. i can tell that you really mean what yu're saying and have passion for wat ur preaching. damn. ten stars and a fav xoxo ♥terrena

Commented on the poem "Welcome to my past" on 12/28/08 at 10:16 AM

"how can you claim to be heartbroken when your heart is somewhere else" hmms ok dat can happen. i mean too bad it does, but ive been there. and im sure u hav too. its like ur heartbroken but u hav to try to move on so u gotta b wit dat person and fall for dem maybe and blahblahblah. but wow...da last line. 'dont try to kill urself too fast.." dats really sad and bitter and pathetic. it REALLY is. it makes this emotional poem "broken, empty, weak".

Commented on the poem "EMPTY" on 12/28/08 at 10:10 AM

okay lemme start with "crying you are river just gave you a way to build a boat giving you my heart just gave you another toy to play with giving you my time just gave you time to waste giving you my love just gave you another thing to take away from me..." awww i love dat part. it kinda sums up things ina way. i love da meaning behind those words. and the acrostic is good. i like dat. and da part "would it be that you let me leave or i let you go?" hmms i think we all ask ourselves that question in these times, but da sad part is dat...we usually let da person go and den wonder about it everyday for the rest of our lives and feel sry for ourselves. ok, maybe not dat deep. sometimes, but i dnt wanna say dat cuz it sound pathetic. okay, neway. dis was deep. but i think theres another side to consider..for u to consider i mean. lol xoxo ♥terrena

Commented on the poem "Fuck You" on 12/28/08 at 10:04 AM

umm.........wow. hmmms...interesting...speechless. :[ harsh. makes me wanna cry. omg dis so much reminds me of a poem someone wrote to me onetime. :[ awww omg sean! okay, well wat do i wanna say. okay. drama drama drama, obviously. but i like how u kept it real da whole way through, and yur emotions r obviously there. "when u cried i drowned in it" awww. aww aww aww! okay. and i the big huge out there clear FUCK YOU at the end was.....good. da title is good to it drew me in. but bout the fuck you, dat was really where i think u captured yur emotions into two words. lmao suprisingly, i do gotta fav dis. and read da ...other poems. aka da responses and one u responded too. sigh. ;] xoxo ♥terrena

Commented on the poem "Change" on 12/28/08 at 09:58 AM

i like dis. it makes me think about things, wonder about things. tihs defintely isnt at i expected wen i first saw the title, or even read the first few lines. i love how u kept your words simple and the storyline interesting and relatable in ways. it had a rapid serenity about it..even though das kinda contradictory, but u shud knw wat i mean. anyway, i like dis and its nice to read something from yu :] xoxo ♥terrena