Nickname:Shortay_With_Vision Country:Great Britain City:leicester State:You Shud Comment Ma Poems Ill Sho Love Bk xXx Gender:Female Age:19 Member Since:Jun 03, 2008 Last Login:Dec 02, 2008 Poems Submitted:18 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:223 Poem Views:1,491 Member Comments:21
omggg yoourr good.. "shall i compare thee raindrops against the window pane in lighted touc " awwwwhh dats so nicely written trickin down in strokes of pasion so smooth n sweet ..bless u.. u sure kno hw to write n u love sprung missyy.. well donee.. ( clappin ma hands ) u sho did yo thang on ere xx loveeeeedd it !! xx xx10 x
dammmm yet another amazing strong powerfull writting inwhich people can relate..? but sumtimes..? u cud turn those tears into action ma.. it ain all bout crying n comitin suicide.. sumtimes ! .. u gotta prove dem wrong by becoming sucessful & achieven.. let dem hate while u shine lol. every1 has a time were dey go through hard deep shit... but u gotta dig ur self out n.. become a better person .. :D i love dis forreal.. !! i think im doin.. a response this .. XxX ! n ay we cant choose. our family.? dey blood related.. bt we can choos are friends.. n dats a foundation of support n ur mentality. is a power for ur future. :D xx keep writing xx n think possativ hun xx
you know wot .. i neeeded to rreead sumin like dis.. lol ders alot going on.. lol.. kinda boosted me up a lil .. forreal i like ur way of writting.. its deep..n its got a pure flow wid meanings make sure u keep writting !.. n never let da pen stop.. maybe one of ma poem.. wuld ?make u wna do a colob.. check why i write out ma ! but i really enjoy this alot !! xx godbless wish i just cud giv u more den 10 xx
Commented on the poem "Death of Delores" on 10/10/08 at 05:54 AM
dammm this is deep i liked it alot love what u wrote.. sure is good.. but quite deep.. makes me wonder why u wrote it thoo...? xx defo a 10.. this makes me think. forrreallll xx
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Commented on the poem "Shall I Compare Thee..." on 10/10/08 at 06:34 AM
