Nickname:Rissa14 Country:United States City:where i chill && write all day everyday State:MD Gender:Female Age:15 Member Since:Aug 10, 2007 Last Login:Dec 03, 2008 Poems Submitted:60 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:458 Poem Views:4,157 Member Comments:289
Commented on the poem "I'm Hurt" on 11/30/08 at 07:48 PM
real talk. i like how you got the piece al mysterious and not straight up saying what you though. like..i would think on average that he cheated. its like you leave it at the readers hands to figure out whats up. but i really like this piece. nice work. ten stars
xoxo
♥RISSA
hmm. this piece is really interesting. i lovee how it sounds like you're taking some kind of stand. but i just don't know what. its just power..like your mind is screaming..and it sounds so strong. this one is interesting. ten stars sis.
xoxo
♥Rissa
Commented on the poem "...freestyle..." on 11/27/08 at 11:28 AM
i like this freestyle. its tight. it makes me think of Lauryn Hill from def poetry on this one episode//season. her flow was tight..and the rhyming was on point. and so is yours. i could hear this being read aloud inmy mind. lovee the artwork. so talented.
xoxo
♥Rissa
Commented on the poem "Ice Queen..." on 11/24/08 at 06:50 PM
dagg yoo. this is really sadd. especially the part where u sad you was going to give that person a hint to go find your heart..and you said it was in that ditch. wow. real talk.thats sad though. i feel you. this piece is perfect for the mood im feeling right now, and the mood that ive been feeling alot lately. ten stars and a favorite sis.
lovee you always.
xoxo
♥Rissa
Commented on the poem "black sheep..." on 11/24/08 at 06:46 PM
i lovedd this.life is really like that too.real talk on this one. i loved how there is so much power in your words, and despite the length..you screamed pages. ten stars and a favorite..damnn sis..what else can i possibly say??
xoxo
♥Rissa
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