ouuu....this is *hot* Ouch, ok...I'm feelin this!!! It's like 30 degrees outside but feelin a lot warmer to me right about now lol.... Again, another beautiful piece, and again, I love the usage of vocabulary in your work. NEVER stop writing, you're VERY talented...
This is def was a man is supposed to be. I should fav this one for sure so the men that come across my page can check it out and finally get the hint!! Well, hopefully at least!
You have a wide range of vocabulary which is hard to find in many poets, but it gives so much edge to your writing. After reading so many poems with the same common words, I'm always looking for something diff. Something with a new venture, someone who's not scared to use the dictionary, and you do it so well. 10 stars hun! Excellent piece!
Commented on the poem "countryfied" on 11/06/08 at 05:37 PM
I love the concept you having going on this piece. Hell, I gotta fav this one!!! This is an excellent write, this kinda made me feel like I was out in the country myself and I'm a city girl!! 10 stars and nothin less babe!
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Commented on the poem "Scribe - You, Desired" on 11/11/08 at 03:27 AM
