Nickname:*~§Poetic§~* Country:United States City:norblom State:IL Gender:Female Age:19 Member Since:Aug 30, 2007 Last Login:Dec 05, 2008 Poems Submitted:173 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:1,568 Poem Views:15,411 Member Comments:200
Commented on the poem "i hurt for him" on 11/18/08 at 02:17 AM
deep piece you let out a lot of him who ever he is and girl i've been here as well nice scribe
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Commented on the poem "Ms. x (My ex)" on 11/18/08 at 02:06 AM
I felt like there could've been more to this piece because it was a very good flow and i thought there would've been more to this story of why she is now your ex but still it was a hott piece next time give the whole story for better effect
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Commented on the poem "Rain" on 11/18/08 at 02:01 AM
Interesting piece it was different than wat i expected cause with the title i thought it was pertaining to how someone felt but really it turned out to be exactly wat the title said about rain kinda mad me think rain wasn't so bad for a min lol
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Commented on the poem "Lake" on 11/18/08 at 01:14 AM
idk y but while reading this i felt so calm like nothing mattered but the peace i felt this was a good piece
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Commented on the poem "I ain't shit" on 11/18/08 at 01:08 AM
This was real Ish right here at first i was kinda confused cause i didn't know you were writng to both babymama's but it was heartfelt i mean atleast you admitt it that you cheated and i can appreciate that
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Commented on the poem "i hurt for him" on 11/18/08 at 02:17 AM
