dame ma you know i had to come threw and bless your write with 10 starz. that was a wonderful and eye opeing write. loved it great flow and approach to the situation. you know i gotta come threw and give you that escape from the secret life.lol.. much love ma
Commented on the poem "New Name" on 10/17/08 at 04:07 AM
DAME MA THATS SOME SAD SAD STUFF RITE THEIR. HELL WE ALL GO THREW THIS FEELING AT SOME POINT IN OUR LIFE. THE TRICK IS TO LEARN FROM IT ALL AND TRY NOT TO PUNISH THE NEXT PERSON WE MEET BECAUSE OF THE IDOTS BEFORE THAT DIDNT KNOW HOW TO TREAT US RITE. ITS ALL IN GODS HANDS ALL YOU CAN DO IS PUT UR BEST FOOT FORWARD TOWARDS ANYTHING THAT YOU DO MA. DONT GIVE UP ON LOVE JUST REDEFINE WHAT IT MEANS TO YOU
Commented on the poem "Here I Stand" on 10/17/08 at 04:01 AM
GREAT RIGHT MA. ITS HARD TO FIND A WOMAN THAT WILL STAND BY YOURSIDE THREW THICK AND THIN. NOW A DAYS EVERYONE WANTS THE GOOD AND NONE OF THE BAD. MUCH LOVE MA FOR THE RITE. SOMEITMES THATS ALL A MAN REALLY WANTS IS A WOMAN TO STAND BY HIS SIDE.
Commented on the poem "Stormy" on 10/08/08 at 01:25 PM
ten starz fam. great write short but with a vivid picture painted of the pain on a stormy loveless day. great write keep doing your thang. and welcome to the group
Commented on the poem "Pussy Pimp Bitch" on 10/08/08 at 12:26 PM
dame thats fucked up ma. why he gotta be nickeys hoe. why he cant be jackies hoe. lol nice write really sick wit it. 10 starz ma. good job
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Commented on the poem "My secret Life (part:3)" on 10/28/08 at 10:44 PM
