Nickname:jargon Country:United States City:somerset State:NJ Gender:Male Age:23 Member Since:Nov 13, 2006 Last Login:Dec 03, 2008 Poems Submitted:166 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:458 Poem Views:9,223 Member Comments:321
Commented on the poem "Opus" on 11/25/08 at 06:35 PM
my favorite so far,
some powerful lines
i like the expansive feeling i get from it,
like it could continue on forever,
like it won't stop
Commented on the poem "Phone Lines" on 11/25/08 at 06:30 PM
i think everyone probably mentioned it
but the last line really stuck out the most,
i think it would be cool if you took that last part and made it a center piece for another poem and go in on it, i like that its a conversational piece draws me in that way
Commented on the poem "What Is Love" on 11/06/08 at 04:39 PM
wow, thats pretty sad,
love and the loss of it can be painful
very true
Commented on the poem "What's going on?" on 11/06/08 at 04:16 PM
im feeling the hook, lol
yes stupidity seems to spread like a disease, i could do without all the cursing, but you came strong and you had a message,
people seem to have a need to not make sense, to not be able to explain why we do some crazy things, but its been like that since the dawn of man,
thanks for sharing!
Commented on the poem "My All" on 11/06/08 at 02:50 PM
sounds like you were his everything,
and he couldn't match the love you gave to him,
unequally yoked
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Commented on the poem "Opus" on 11/25/08 at 06:35 PM
