and I have to come back one more ... [as your knew I would] HEHE! ... They way you closed this was crazy beautiful! ... and solidified! ... ok Im done!
Shit Kris . Each stanza was DYNAMITE . I don't need to provide you a prolific response as YOU ALREADY KNOW the power of your PEN is FORCEFUL & NECESSARY .... wait wait wait ... I need to reference one point you made though ... if only the blade could save me today from
the mountains range
of swollen red eyes
and heartless apologies
I, too, drank from the river of lies....... This in itself describes your feelings to wire ... Very nice love .. very nice!!! BRAVO! ... I absolutely enjoyed this ... -meg
WOW!!!!! FUCKING WOW!!! ... Raja! ... MY queen ... I mourn for you ... and I again rejoice in your freedom ... I admire your STRENGTH ... and I love you .. because in fact .. you are YOU .. and I wouldn't trade you for the world ... -thank you for this my love .. and continue to :"incite the lite and educate the righteous" - elle
Commented on the poem "Mea Culpa" on 07/29/08 at 03:32 PM
[Claps hands and laughs in adundance] ... you most politely, and officially checked anyone who dares to contest your artistry ... I love this! -elle sole!
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Commented on the poem "if the blade could save me" on 08/08/08 at 10:25 AM
