Nickname:edeezy Country:United States City:Akron State:OH Gender:Female Age:18 Member Since:Aug 10, 2008 Last Login:Jan 05, 2009 Poems Submitted:17 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:60 Poem Views:635 Member Comments:21
Commented on the poem "They Say" on 12/25/08 at 12:07 AM
to be honest wat!!!!!!! dang u can't end on a cliff hanger like that.... i feel u on this piece tho wen u rly try to love sumone hard and u end up gettin hurt from it, it makes u a differnt person... at one pt. i said i was jus gonna be single for a while and give up on love but life is alll about falling down and getting back up so if i jus cut off all realtionships and not allow someone to have my heart i might miss out on divine mate at tht divine time cuz i don't want to give my whole self to them becuz of the past hurts so don't close yourself up let the new year bring a new u don't hold on to past hurts let it go... have a merry x-mas and a happy new year!
Commented on the poem "*Untitled*" on 12/24/08 at 11:58 PM
DAMN! this poem gave me chills wen i was reading it! i want sumone to feel this way about me... beautiful!!!!
damn! 10 starz! pain does make u bitter and angry towards everyone and its rly hard to forget about it and let it go and be pleasant towards those who didn't do anything but thts life everyone has to fall in order to kno how great it is wen u get up.
damn that is a great way to think of life! i'm at puberty sqaure lol. but this a rly great write... 10 starz
Commented on the poem "LIKE YOU CARE ?" on 12/23/08 at 12:35 PM
damn, i kno exactly wat u mean unfortunetly this happens to alot of ppl wen there down and out they feel as though theres no one there wit them thru it but wen u look back on it u kno who was there with us? GOD cuz wen u think he's the farthest away he's always the closest remeber theres only one set of footprints in the sand because god picked us up and carried us... 10*
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Commented on the poem "They Say" on 12/25/08 at 12:07 AM
