Nickname:DorianGrey Country:United States City:Hartford State:CT Gender:Male Age:22 Member Since:Oct 04, 2007 Last Login:Jan 08, 2009 Poems Submitted:68 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:387 Poem Views:4,819 Member Comments:88
Commented on the poem "Collabo - Roses" on 12/12/08 at 07:19 AM
I luv this poem! And not just cause I wrote half of it :)...Liquid just set it up so lovely. "love osmosis style"...?! For real, you can just sit back and ponder just that for a long while. "Hidden between the lines/Hints of father time..." So serious. This is poetry. And not to be cocky but that ending: "I don't know whether to whither/Or withdraw into hard stem/begin again as a rosebud/afraid to bloom." TUFF. I love the melding of minds--the story and the craftsmanship. Anytime Liq..you kno I luv you! *D*
And here I was thinking I was the only one. (I was raised by my mother, aunt, and grandmother) Greetings and Salutations from the planet Always man....*D*
DAMN GIRL!!! This was....I mean...and I was like...and we talk'd about...but I nvr thought....I am so proud of you. You're inspiring me right now. Seriously reading your work is taking a defibrillator to poetic places I thought were dead. *D*
Commented on the poem "Jacen" on 11/20/08 at 03:57 PM
WoW...I've def been sleepin on my bff in ATL...you're quite the wordsmith! I luv'd the imagery and fluid movement. The first 5 stanzas really put the reader in Jacen's world and then we see him as you see him with all the motherly luv...this was beautiful. *D*
Wheww..I needed this...I've been getting tired of the same ole' on GS. This was inspriational. I love the laid-back neo-soul flow of it and the subject matter. I also loved the motion of "fall away"--you crafted that very well. *D*
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November 13, 2008 at 08:21 AM
Remember this:
The grass IS greener on the other side of the fence; but now you're homeless and being arrested for trespassing. Brown grass doesn't seem so bad NOW does it?
A wiseman once said:
"I ALWAYS tell the truth. Even when I lie." -Tony M.
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Commented on the poem "Collabo - Roses" on 12/12/08 at 07:19 AM
