Nickname:Dnasty Country:United States City:moreno valley State:CA Gender:Male Age:21 Member Since:May 03, 2008 Last Login:Jan 07, 2009 Poems Submitted:64 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:43 Poem Views:1,536 Member Comments:17
Commented on the poem "Deep Trouble" on 01/04/09 at 08:31 PM
this is real creative i like the way u think
u are right these things our people do not see the truth how life is afecting not jus the people the lil ones to 10 stars
see you cant change no hoe to a house wife dam that is some shit that bitch i bet she not even yours and that ring is what you had thinked that no good as bitch
SO I MEET THIS GIRL NAME BREESHAY 8 MONTHS AGO AND I JUST STARED TO GO OUT WITH HER 6 MOUNTHS AGO I THINK SHE REALLY THE ONE FOR ME BECUASE SHE REAL WITH ME AND THIS RELATIONSHIP I THINK NO I KNOW SHE MY WIFE FOR LIFE SO I DONT REALLY CARE ABOUT THOSE OTHER HOES ON HER BECUASE MY BABY BREESHAY THE BEST OF THEM ALL SILLY ASS HOES LOL MY BABY THE ONE IN ONLY LOL NO FOR REAL THO SHE MY BABY MAMA THO I LOVE THIS GIRL TO DEATH SHE CARRY MY HEART EVERY WHERE SHE GOES SHES A BIG PART OF MY LIFE TO AND I CAN TRUELY SAY SHE MY WORLD AND I LOVE HER MORE THEN EVERY THING AND I MEAN EVERY THING I LOVE MY BABY SHE ONCE CARRYED MY BABY BUT WE LOST IT ITS OK BECUASE GOD GOT OUR BACK NEXT TIME BECUASE WE HAVE A DREAM AND A FUTURE AND THATS ALL YOU NEED IN THIS WORLD TO LIVE IN A GREAT BIG FANTASY WORLD...