Nickname:DL Martin Country:United States City:Indianapolis State:IN Gender:Male Age:21 Member Since:Mar 10, 2008 Last Login:Dec 04, 2008 Poems Submitted:32 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:456 Poem Views:3,210 Member Comments:107
Commented on the poem "The Comment Box" on 11/27/08 at 03:13 PM
yo...I'll spare you the details of just how hard it was not to put "great write" and keep it pushing, lol. I can definitely relate to this one. Tho I've been MIA for a bit, I write for pretty much the same reasons. Irks the hell outta me when u pour a lot into a write and somebody just blows it off...take 10 seconds to say something real, damn lol
a mother's love ain't no joke yo...I've wondered many times looking back on when I was growing up how & why my mother put up w/ all the hell I put here thru.
Commented on the poem "Quote." on 11/20/08 at 12:58 PM
good point. I've never understood why people try to change or mold people into something that they're just not
Commented on the poem "Can I..." on 11/20/08 at 12:35 PM
Well dang ma, that sucks. I love the write, and the way it's penned but the story behind it is so bittersweet. Wonderful way to pen out your emotions. Great write
Commented on the poem "Sexin' you" on 11/13/08 at 10:05 PM
yo this was hot. Kinda saw the ending coming but still the ride was so right, lol. "I mentally twist you out of your physical / and develop you into a holy being...by loving the god outta you". Well spoken