Commented on the poem "TOUCH" on 09/12/08 at 02:03 AM
as i read this poem my body went through the motions of allowing my inner me to hear the beating of my heart and i felt like i was actually in this write. if you want me to i can put on the curve crush that you like and send you a shirt i the mail if it means that it will revive you
i feel like you take past events and write of them i like how you have taken a real life situation that i know aboutall to well and have just captured it into a poem. i want to be the man of your dreams and there will be no real need to s-s-s-s tudder because you know that i will handel business for you and yours
i love how you placed the music with in the write to give it the sexual atmosphere. and yes you can practice being my wife for a week or two i love. the different scenes that you replay through your mind. just laying on my bed. i mean (clears throat) the california king sized bed
Commented on the poem "FUNKY FANSHAWE" on 09/12/08 at 01:07 AM
word scheme off the chain. you know i am feeling this one. i have mixed feelings about this write. i love how you put words together. as always
be good and keep them comming i have to keep up.
THATS WUZAMP I LIKE THIS ONE AND I LOVE HOW YOU PUT A TWIST ON BEING GROWN IN THE WAY THAT I MEANT IT BUT EVERY WORD PHRASE HAS A DIFFERENT MEANING AND I LOVE YOUR POINT OF VEIW. YOU ALSO MADE A GREAT POINT ABOUT PEOPLE SAYING THINGS ABOUT YOU AND YOUR DECISIONS THAT YOU HAVE TO LIVE WITH. YOUR REPLY IS ONE OF MY OWN AND I QUOTE YOU ON THIS ONE . "BITCH I'M GROWN" TEN STARS
THANKS ALOT GS
August 09, 2007 at 11:58 AM
THANKS TO ALL. I AM GLAD TO BE THE POET OF THE DAY. MAN YOU ALL DON'T KNOW HOW HAPPY THIS MAKES ME. OH YEAH HAPPY BIRTHDAY BIG BROTHER. LOVE YOU ALOT. BE E-Z MY NOCKAZ. THANKS AGAIN AND CHECK OUT SOME OF MY FAVORITES PROMISE YALL WONT BE DISAPPOINTED. GOON SQUAD!
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