Nickname:daughter of zion Country:United States City:Columbus State:OH Gender:Female Age:23 Member Since:Nov 02, 2008 Last Login:Jan 07, 2009 Poems Submitted:19 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:40 Poem Views:533 Member Comments:3
nice and sweet.....I give you all the stares in the world for this one.
Commented on the poem "WHY ?" on 12/24/08 at 11:47 PM
I like your write, the why is not the bad part it's the answer that's scary finding the true answer to the question is what leaves us torn.
Commented on the poem "FORGET IT" on 12/24/08 at 11:41 PM
sounds like you chose to give your love to the wrong one...you do know that without love you have nothing, nice flow God bless you!
Commented on the poem "*Untitled*" on 12/24/08 at 11:26 PM
cute write I think you have the right idea!...lol
Commented on the poem "They Say" on 12/24/08 at 11:17 PM
well you told me to tell you what I thought of it and the emotion in this poem if flawless, I wish I can say that I can relate but I can't and I don't think you are asking me to, it's a very different outlook on what love is and love isn't really love till it's mutual, this girl sounds like she's missing out at the same time you sound like you have a lot more to learn..Good job!