Commented on the poem "Heartless" on 01/02/09 at 04:23 AM
i feel u ma... i love this song and you expanded it and speak on why you (or whoever the subject of the poem) became heartless in the first place... lovin this write keep doin your thing through the new year 10 stars
i feel this right here ma like how u show dude how u gone ride for him... i see he get u whatever u like... dats how it got 2 be real talk... i kno how u feel and also loving that voice you did the damn thing tenn starz
i once thought i felt this way about a young lady... beautiful poem, i had this perception of her yet i was wrong but true love shines even in the dark times.... thats besides the point anyway great write keep it up for the new year pimp... oh yeah great name LOL
Commented on the poem "Love Pains" on 12/09/08 at 09:26 PM
yes harlem... i understand what you're saying shawty... somewhats what they see aint me... you know how to put words on paper i can relate 2 that why i like reading your work lil mama.. i gotta give you 10 on this ma... mwah C. Renegade
thishere what im talkin bout i got a poem call breakfast in bed similar lol but wouldnt have 2 go down the street when u got perfect meal right there in the bed lol nice write ten stars... Ren
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Commented on the poem "Heartless" on 01/02/09 at 04:23 AM
