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Nickname: ComplexConfessions
Country: Antarctica
City: Wood`Lands
State: Northeast
Gender: Female
Age: 20
Member Since: Mar 21, 2007
Last Login: Dec 04, 2008
Poems Submitted: 11
Average Ranking:
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Poem Comments: 101
Poem Views: 1,027
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About Me
 
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About Me:
In keeping with cyber tradition, namely one which sees self-descriptive sections of various sites littered with the 'what i wish i was' as opposed to 'what i am' .. i would like to state that i'm quite the enviable chit. [& if you didn't quite get that, what i meant is i'm far from enviable & most definitely not a chit. though, the lack of comprehension suggests you are..?] =P Long live the Word!

 


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2. Jdbrown's Everything
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3. U N I Verse
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4. The Luscious Carnival
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5. So Beautiful In Nature
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6. Loving Lavishly
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7. Daughter Of The Abuser
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8. Pro'screation Offspring
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9. In Wonderland
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10. The Best 7 Yrs Of My...
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2. Run Fat Boy Run
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Mumbai Attacks. [not a poem] mourning Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 12/03/08 (10:00 AM) 22 5
The Gentleman Cried That Day sonnet Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/20/08 (07:02 AM) 132 14
Dawn of Day positive Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/19/08 (05:49 AM) 82 10
Quietus positive Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/19/08 (03:45 AM) 76 7
Inherent Sagacity reality Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/18/08 (06:04 AM) 62 5
Seamless Dreams emotions Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/18/08 (04:42 AM) 86 9
Lady of the Highlands positive Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/17/08 (05:21 AM) 67 6
Midnight Finale gothic/lithium Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/17/08 (04:12 AM) 87 4
Swan Song gothic/lithium Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 09/16/08 (07:12 AM) 107 7
Infinite Demise of the Protagonist life Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 08/26/08 (05:53 AM) 126 10

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 Commented on the poem "Sleep" on 11/26/08 at 07:55 AM
Ah, the cruelty of sleep when it withholds its soothing qualities and instead chooses to torment. I think, what i like most about this piece is how well you've captured that gnawing feeling of wanting to sleep but not being able to. The restlessness, the 'toss and turn' feel of being deprived of rest- you brought that into the poem so well and that makes this piece all the more vividly expressive. Excellent way to end it too, with "somniferous blessing" ..so right. Very well done, Mari!

 Commented on the poem "violet (h2o)colors" on 11/26/08 at 01:09 AM
Ah, i remember this beautiful piece. Serenity is what exudes from this and makes it so pleasing to read. The first ten words, it's so soothing. I just think, though this falls into a specific genre, that anyone who simply wishes to relax can read this and just bask in the sheer splendor of your words.

 Commented on the poem "kijana's war ( ni penzi dadu)" on 11/26/08 at 01:05 AM
Writes like this bring me back to the atrocities that seem so commonplace in this world, today. It seems as if the more power grows, the amount of people who want that power grows and pretty soon we're left with nothing but situations like these. It's horrid. With structure, form and just afew words, you've made an excruciating point, 11th.

 Commented on the poem "african moon rain dance [n'zinga's song]" on 11/26/08 at 12:47 AM
As always with your work, this is a moving piece that combines creativity, inspiration and the beauty of culture with an important message. It is indeed such a such sad truth, that this 'succumbing' due to a lack of preventives seems to be an endless cycle, as the end of this piece suggests. Thought-provoking, 11th.

 Commented on the poem "So What If It Hurts" on 11/24/08 at 10:27 PM
I like that last line and how it pretty much sums up the 'end of the day' theory. There are many ways to take this write and i'm inclined to think most would believe it to be of a bitterness, but i don't know, it seems more matter-of-fact to me. Like, you're just stating what is happening, with a detachment that is the best defense when faced with these trials. "A horrid laugh from behind closed doors As I lay in a pile on the floor" ..the laughs of those who find joy in the hardships of others. Tsk, such a sad truth isn't it? Well expressed with a deep emotional yet detached (appealing contrast) feel.

 
  A Time For Everything.. i Trust, i Shall.
  October 13, 2008 at 03:11 AM
[[I'm going to be on somewhat of a hiatus til' the 24th of Nov. Finals and all. So, i'll be catching up on writes about once a week.
Bear with me, please.]]


-edit-

Indeed, exams ended as of the 24th. I shall resume reading starting now, so.. can't wait. =]

 
 
 
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`Scriptixz
12/03/08 (05:59 PM)
for your pain and frustration and for not being there- i had no idea but i still feel so bad *sighs* i love you kindred, you know that. I just hope this compensates for my silence *sighs deeply*

 
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