Nickname:cherrydrive613 Country:United States City:Chicago State:IL Gender:Female Age:18 Member Since:Dec 06, 2006 Last Login:Nov 23, 2008 Poems Submitted:55 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:584 Poem Views:4,976 Member Comments:160
Commented on the poem "i like it" on 01/16/08 at 05:13 PM
I'm with the other perons in saying that you need to work on your imagery a lil but more and like I said again your flow needs to be a lil more in touch with your writin but I LOVE the fact that you just say whats on ur mind