Commented on the poem "Patch Work" on 01/06/09 at 02:02 PM
Very great write,and I'm guessing this is all of a metaphor,it sounds like it and if it is it really sharpens the piece up,and brings it to a new level,and describes what you were feeling really well..10 stars
Great poem from finish to start,showed great emotions and real stuff that happens from time to time again,and the last 2 lines I really felt cause it was inspirational and that's how I feel and what I do,for all of that I give 10 stars and a favorite poem.great write
Commented on the poem "Our Faith" on 01/06/09 at 01:32 PM
Wow..this whole poem was amazing..the lines and word play the usage of words,and everything about this poem is great the last stanza just set the poem off amazingly,for this whole poem i gotta favorite it great write.
Commented on the poem "Out On The Ocean" on 01/06/09 at 01:29 PM
This is really good I felt the inspiration a bit,I liked the second stanza "
THA OCEAN IS A REFLECTION OF MY LIFE SITUATIONS OR MORE LIKE THE WAVES
SOME BIG AND SOME SMALL AND SOME OF EM SO BIG DEY LAST FOR DAY DAYZ
I NEED SOMEONE TO JOINE DIS MOTION WITH ME TO MOVE AS ONE NICE WAVE " and the rest of the poem as well..great write
Commented on the poem "God Help Me" on 01/06/09 at 01:26 PM
Damn very nice and deep,I felt the emotion behind and inside of the poem,the words you said it just made it dark,i love this poem,its a bit short though,10 stars no doubt,very good write.
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Commented on the poem "Patch Work" on 01/06/09 at 02:02 PM
