wow i am just amazed at this piece. loved the concept and the whole story feel to it...funny lines in this. you kept my attention all the way thru..gotta add it as a fav cuz i loved it that much. def a well deserved 10
Commented on the poem "Admiration" on 10/02/08 at 05:41 PM
i really like this. it was nicely done. "I wonder if by me looking at her She is equally intriuged." nice flow to it....
every emotion you put forth in this poem was felt as i read it. u did a beyond good job writing this...i dont even know what to say actually...some crazy stuff u gotta deal with. but hold yo head up.....
i understand where u coming from with this....its like the only thing u can do is cry when people dont understand or you want to tell them but dont know how...so its like nobody knows the inward struggle and battle that you have to deal with everyday. well done....
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