Nickname:**Bonita** Country:United States City:Orangeburg State:SC Gender:Female Age:19 Member Since:Mar 21, 2007 Last Login:May 29, 2008 Poems Submitted:8 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:62 Poem Views:561 Member Comments:11
wow this one took me for a trip forreal! wow I laugh because of the surprise you give me when the man tells his part. It sounds so perfect from her perspective yet when he speaks its so deep and mind thrilling. I give this ten starz. You have a flawless talent that shines through strongly. I like this alot. Marvelous job. I am impressed. Keep up the with this talent I like it. I am making this a favorite of mine. nice job!
Commented on the poem ">>WET<<" on 05/25/08 at 09:41 PM
This piece of work is extordinrlly incrediable. I aplaud you and give yu two thumbs way up ma. I love how the flow of the poem takes place with twist and turns of images and metaphors are placed just right in here. I LOVE IT! ten starz of course. This is as if I was there myself. You should check out my poem called 'Role Playing". It is a different flavor you may not be in touch with at the end but it revolves around like this piece here. I must say you have a talent that is shining strongly through your work. This is just beautiful. Keep up the good work. Keep that pen moving.
awww..... this is so sweet. I love the flow in this piece and I see your talent shine through with such power. I give this piece ten starz********** I especially love the part where it goes " Together I wanna experience every single thing that life has to offer. and yea thats true when I say i couldnt love another anymore than I love you." That itself is deep. Keep up the good work ma.
Commented on the poem "The rain" on 05/25/08 at 05:20 PM
wow dam im impressed ma. I love the sexual mix lol ha! I give this a ten ten ten! Dam! I am putin this on my fav's ma.
Commented on the poem "A mum to be" on 05/25/08 at 05:16 PM
wow this is a real inspirational piece you have here. I am very impressed and it takes alot to do so. I give you ten starz ma and a high thumbs up. I am puttin' this on my fav's 4real. I will definitly be lookin for your new writes ma. deep so fa sho deep.......
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